Chloealexis

Ray was just a normal girl, heading to a dog show on Friday the 13th. When she arrived, a blonde hair blue eyed boy was standing near the gate. The boy's name was Lucas and Ray just fell in love. She thought that he was the one, but new he wouldn't like her. Ray wasn't the most popular, prettiest, most likely to win prom queen kind of girl. No Ray was an adopted, not rich, short girl. No one ever thought she was pretty or good enough. Ray always thought less of herself, and new no boys would want her. When Ray turned the corner an old man was waiting for her, and called her over. The man was an old, smelly, grubby, dirty man. She wanted to run away but she didn't. The old man held up a balloon ,and started talking. He said: would you liked to have everything you have ever dreamed of, to be beautiful, to be popular, to have that boy you want? Ray looked at him with big eyes, and said YES! The old man said: you will only have a year to get everything you have ever dreamed of, but you will have to where this necklace. Ray took the necklace put it on, and in an a matter of minutes she was the prettiest, most popular girl in her school. She was so happy, she even got that cute blonde hair blue eyed boy, at the dog park, which she didn't even go to. When she went home that night, she sat on her bed just thinking about school the next day, all the amazing things that would happen. The next day she woke up, and went to school with a smile on her face. Everyone didn't even talk to her, she was so angry with the old man. No student, teacher, principal, or lunch lady would smile, and give her a hello. When she walked into her home room class, Lucas was at his table. When she got there, to say hi Lucas just looked at her laughed and walked away.

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